The vagabond.
I feel like one
I feel sad that i feel like one.
but i feel like i am wobbling around in the sea with no anchoring.
I feel like i am loitering around with a very vague sense of purpose, a whole lot of ambition but very unsystematic approach with little respect for my own time.If that makes any sense.
I feel like a vagabond.And i don't feel fine.
I feel like one
I feel sad that i feel like one.
but i feel like i am wobbling around in the sea with no anchoring.
I feel like i am loitering around with a very vague sense of purpose, a whole lot of ambition but very unsystematic approach with little respect for my own time.If that makes any sense.
I feel like a vagabond.And i don't feel fine.
Written by Dr.A.R copyright 2008
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