Four years ago,
I stopped talking to someone.
This past month,
that ghost was revisited ,
Quite unexpectedly,
Much to the regret of both parties.
And as past patterns unfolded all over again like clockwork,
much to the chagrin and distress of both parties,
It was a revelation to see,
that just when you thought you have grown up oh so much,
you realize that,
you haven't after all.
Ghosts,ghosts..
revisited,revisited.
A dynamic,
A habit,
and me and them,
slaves of habits,
The interaction,
repeats itself,
starts eroding all that was healed ,
or what appeared to heal in those four years.
All castles of four years ,
crumble in a minute.,
a month of interaction reveals deep dents all over.
Now i have to go rebuild my own credibility in my own eyes.
All a revelation,all of us slaves of habits.
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